Kchoo
Lunar Goon III Pilot
- Joined
- Sep 5, 2017
- Messages
- 192
- Location
- Texas
Oh, I have had classes on that... what you witnessed here is the freeform stream of conciousness... it is not edited, or proper, I know... some complain that too clean of writing on these boards lacks sincerity, so I gave them what they asked for...You acknowledge the ‘angry mob’ rushing you to finish the story (or at least get to the point).
Are you in the position to accept the criticism surrounding this aspect of your writing ability ?
You could try inviting a professionally qualified and trusted english teacher to teach the basics of creative writing.
I do have editors. At least 8 edits for each published item, and they still aren"t perfect. But I do do not believe in cookie cutter perfection as it does detract from the essences of realism.
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